I love collabs....so much talent in one place. nice!
I love collabs....so much talent in one place. nice!
Swag
First Collab I couldn't finish. The lack of color is disappointing
What, it’s the sketch collab. It’s been like this every year. The goal is making a rough animation. Not a fully fledged piece. It’s for animators to improve on animation.
Is this a joke?
Good gracious. I'm not even an animator, and I can see that you've well and truly missed the point of this collab.
I think i've lost all faith in humanity.
WHAT
username checks out
Is this bait
Bruh
Hey guys, I just want to feel included and important.
This was kool...i'm really interesting in how this was created....mainly how was the envelope animated...were the photos of the envelop edited in photoshop or something....i saw no strings or fingers or anything holding up the mail....and i thought the bear was writing letters to itself...that was kind of creeping me out...but maybe im tired and need to re-watch..i was just unsure if the bear really had a friend...anyways nice work!!
Haha yeah, luckily he was writing to his friend ;D
I guess you mean the part with the envelope going into/ coming out of the chimney? I actually did a mix of methods: on some parts there are hidden things securing it, and on others it actually was just falling and I just timed my shots. I wanted to get some blur with the motion, so having actual motion helped ;)
Thanks for the great review! :)
I love the soundtrack.at the beginning..it really caught my attention. I laughed a little but you should flesh out your plan of execution a lot more. I don't think the story made that much since. The drawings are not bad at all. spend more time on that. Lastly, around the time that the music changed to a "horror scene" the voice audio got really loud...not sure why.
I guess overall, good start..spend more time on the project for better quality...and for planning I would suggest learning how to storyboard. (If you don't already know)
That way you have a general idea of the direction you're trying to take.
PLEASE ADD A PLAY/REPLAY BUTTON TO YOUR PROJECT....ITS NOT THAT HARD. Thats my biggest pet peeve. Thank God for the NG Collapse Button. Anyways I hope this helps a tiny bit.
Thank you very much for the critism i shall take all of this in hopes of improving myself in the next animation. :D
not bad but i would've made the "newt" lettering a lot fancier than just black text....especially for something so short.
Ok, thanks for the advice!
this wasn't bad...you did a good job telling the story...made me laugh a little.
Tankz :3
started drawing and didnt stop until the hand fell off...
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